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                    Suicide
                   I cried myself to sleep
                Not bearing to live another day
                All I could see in the mirror
               Was a girl filled with tears
                 Happiness had exist
                 I missed those days
               Now my life ends here.
Hey Guys. First off PLEASE NO BAD CRITIQUES. THIS WAS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A POEM

Well I wrote this because of what I been thought the past years and I know every has had this feeling but let me tell you something it's not worth it. It isn't. All you got to do is hold on! :) I did and you can too! Also if you are having this problem talk to someone you trust
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TheObsessedNerd Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
This was really good, i think a lot of people, including myself, can relate to it, and have felt this way sometime in our lives.
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Everyone has not just you. BTW I NEED TO SEE YOUR FACE!
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YaminoHikari14 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
This is beautiful, I've been in this situation and your right, it's not worth it, things may be bad as of the moment, but you don't get good things without seeing bad right? Unlike you though, none of my real life friends, teachers and even my parents nevr found out >.< But to everyone else who may be reading this and thinking about it, I reccomend getting the right help! I'm glad you've managed to get through it, doing something like that shows your a truly srong person :)
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the kind words :huggle: Yeah I remember when I did want to but hey I still have a lot more to go Why end it now. As my mother says she told me why end my life when I'm still young. And yes A lot of people have been in this situation, but I just want to prove to people that it get's better. :) All they need is a friend btw I'm glad your still here even if you have been through this I'm glad you had the courage to hold on :D
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mabelpinesrules1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
so deep
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:iconhikari-raven:
Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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Which-will-it-be Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
//This is a good poem :hug: just take care of yourself, ok? Or else I'm going to have to hug you every time *Tiki* I go into chat >:3//
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! I do it was all that happened in the past :) Haha I don't mind the hugs, I like hugs actually :huggle:
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Which-will-it-be Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
:tighthug: You're welcome and alright~ >:3 Beware of hugging Navarre?//
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:iconhikari-raven:
Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz: Navarre would kill me if I gave him a hug XD
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Which-will-it-be Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
:iconbrohugplz: Or just stare at you like 'wtf'? XD
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsnugglyplz: LOL
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ShadowFlareWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
;^; so s4d.......1 h4d 3xp1r13nc3d th1s b3for3..........but th4t w4s 1n th3 p4st.....
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you Trezi :) I flt like writing this to get it out of my system also you shouldn't worry about the past it happened and now you're living in the present. :) :huggle:
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ShadowFlareWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
1 know~
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:iconhikari-raven:
Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:) Now all we have to do is enjoy life until it's time for us to say goodbye
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ShadowFlareWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
mhm
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:iconhikari-raven:
Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And just not think about. My mom says where're still young why think about this now
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ShadowFlareWolf Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
th4t 1s tru3...
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:iconhikari-raven:
Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah
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kiddopolis Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012
;A;
A+ work. I freaking love this.
<3 Baby, baby are you ok now?
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks for the kind words KiddoChan :) :hug: Yeah I'm better happened a few months ago but I'm over it.
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