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                    Suicide
                   I cried myself to sleep
                Not bearing to live another day
                All I could see in the mirror
               Was a girl filled with tears
                 Happiness had exist
                 I missed those days
               Now my life ends here.
Hey Guys. First off PLEASE NO BAD CRITIQUES. THIS WAS MY FIRST TIME WRITING A POEM

Well I wrote this because of what I been thought the past years and I know every has had this feeling but let me tell you something it's not worth it. It isn't. All you got to do is hold on! :) I did and you can too! Also if you are having this problem talk to someone you trust
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TheObsessedNerd Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012
This was really good, i think a lot of people, including myself, can relate to it, and have felt this way sometime in our lives.
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Everyone has not just you. BTW I NEED TO SEE YOUR FACE!
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YaminoHikari14 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012
This is beautiful, I've been in this situation and your right, it's not worth it, things may be bad as of the moment, but you don't get good things without seeing bad right? Unlike you though, none of my real life friends, teachers and even my parents nevr found out >.< But to everyone else who may be reading this and thinking about it, I reccomend getting the right help! I'm glad you've managed to get through it, doing something like that shows your a truly srong person :)
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much for the kind words :huggle: Yeah I remember when I did want to but hey I still have a lot more to go Why end it now. As my mother says she told me why end my life when I'm still young. And yes A lot of people have been in this situation, but I just want to prove to people that it get's better. :) All they need is a friend btw I'm glad your still here even if you have been through this I'm glad you had the courage to hold on :D
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mabelpinesrules1 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student General Artist
so deep
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks
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Which-will-it-be Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
//This is a good poem :hug: just take care of yourself, ok? Or else I'm going to have to hug you every time *Tiki* I go into chat >:3//
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! I do it was all that happened in the past :) Haha I don't mind the hugs, I like hugs actually :huggle:
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Which-will-it-be Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012
:tighthug: You're welcome and alright~ >:3 Beware of hugging Navarre?//
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Hikari-Raven Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconsupertighthugplz: Navarre would kill me if I gave him a hug XD
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